Ah the pain I felt in this piece it's truly sad you can give away every thing that you ever thought held memories but even then it won't go away I've been through there destroyed poems destroyed stuff all to forget...but I still can't great poem 5/5 |
by Beautiful Soul
Unique! Ghosts are not a topic a lot of people write about. With objects in general, I think the ones we keep are special to us or hold a meaning deeper than anyone knows at all. I do understand that sometimes thoughts of the past can be haunting. And that in turn makes your grief come alive. The eerie feeling is enhanced well with the wording. Using tombstone and graveyard really connects well to the poem and the ending. Nice set up. The ending is brilliant I feel. No matter what the ghosts seem to be apart of your dreams and memories. Plus a choir tells me there are many ghosts each one apart of a certain object. Well done. |