This was simply worded, but tugged on the heartstrings. I also thought it had a good flow, very soft and graceful. I liked many aspects of this poem such as this lover's lullaby "kissing" you, their voice whispering both of your dreams (almost like breathing life into them), and how you still love, almost like you can't keep it within your heart, it just escapes and you cannot help but feel those overwhelming emotions that are so real and alive.

It was beautiful and it's touching I hope I can let go of the memories with this poem to help me cope 5/5

-Bet

Oh Wow this is beautifull and heartbreaking. Very well written!!!