by Baby Rainbow Jul 16, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I long to be returned |
by Beautiful Soul
With past memories they can be good and bad. And they can very much so alter the present. Or even the future (which seems to be the case). It starts out with happiness and joy. Fond memories of a young child are something you cannot forget. I loved how you talk about your granddad. And like Hannah said he seemed to be the last relative. And that's where the foster home comes into play. The first stanza seemed to be a flashback and then you snapped back to present day. There is such a tone at the end. You are trying to be greatful for what you have, but nothing is the same anymore. And you have grown so accustomed to being in foster homes that nothing is the same. Well done. 5/5 |
Saffie, Saffie, Saffie... what you always do to my heart! </3 |