by Darren Jul 18, 2014
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Kaleidoscopic |
by Beautiful Soul
I'm really glad you wrote this. Because there are so many ways you could go! Of course I have to say that I believe that the title makes the whole poem. "Colors fighting" Makes you think about a lot of things even before you read the whole poem. With a title you want to draw the readers eye. And you did that here. Kaleidoscopic is such a great word to use. Because it makes you think of so many things. Rainbows come to mind. It could also mean an artist painting. But as I said this works well as a poem with the title and combined. EExcellent poem I feel. No mistakes at all!! |
by Darren
This is a great comment for such a small poem. |