The title I love because it is about your daughter in general so you know. But the way you wrote it is very unique in my opinion. You seemed to talk about your life before you had your daughter and the way you thought it would turn out. But then you had a realization that your family was more important than anything else. I believe you are saying that you were on cloud nine so to speak and your daughter grounded you. I really like how you put this in the "sad category" as well. Because though there is love the hidden message is sadness. You have love for your daughter but deep inside there is sadness. But she saved you from the life that would have destroyed you it seems. Great write!

James is right this poem is beautiful I love how you made a poem to your daughter not many have or ever will because to them poetry isn't a "good enough gift" but it's the ONE thing that will stay through the ages it can be passed down to son to daughter and then it repeats again beautiful poem over all I really do like the rhyme scheme and the way it doesn't always flow 5/5

-Bet