by Alexandra
Beautiful. I've always really enjoyed nature and the inspiration that it brings. |
by Beautiful Soul
Wordplay seems to be very important when it comes to imagery or even some metaphors. I'm going to put my hat in and say this is one of your better poems. Its in the way the stanzas connect with the wording. Example. Using baptism and flower is a great way of saying that flowers cannot grow without rain. And even romance cannot bloom without some "rain" or tears. But maybe I'm reading too far into it. Avalanche I love. There are so many ways you can play around with it. You did well and were very clever with the "fall" line. It captures that moment seemingly when you fell in love. One touch can do that. This poem gives the reader a warm feeling inside because I believe its about (as I said before) that moment of falling in love when you just know. Great use of the metaphors. I'm in love with this poem. Excellent! |
by Maple Tree
Feelings go hand in hand with nature, and Hannah has captivated me this week. What a dazzling, metaphoric nature poem! |