Ha! How creative this poem is!

I liked the flow and the rhyme to this piece, it worked well and matched the tone you had. It had a lot of suspense in the poem, as to what was going to happen next and if the pupils were going to be okay. I like the added character of the butcher, he again fitted with the theme of the poem and the whole idea was really creative. I could picture this as a scene out of like "The Simpsons" or something like that, and I can just imagine the kids raving about their big wild adventure on the way to school lol.