Comments : October

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is a really powerful and beautiful acrostic poem! The title reading down the side of the poem is very pretty, one of the many poetry forms I adore actually..

    I would like to give you an idea you can try if you wish.. Acrostic poems read beautifully in the way you format it... here is a format idea:

    Oh! my people

    Come back

    To me your Creator

    Often do I call

    But you failed my calls

    Every second i am

    Ready to give you.....

    total freedom, only if you are ready.
    {from your dearest maker}

    give a few spaces apart for your ending lines so the reader can see October- also seconds should be second.

    Just a format idea- Either way, I really enjoyed this poem, Beautiful!!

    • 10 years ago

      by Obimuyiwa Psalmist

      Thanks alot Maple Tree. Am here to learn and am learning. Am happy to be part of this. Am grateful, don't hesistate to correct me more and more. For no one is perfect