by The Princess Jul 21, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
When our feeling were still verdurous |
Judging comment: |
Incredible poem, the way you weave words is beautiful and profound. I liked how you separated a few lines as they gave this emotional impact, especially emphasizing how much this person became a part of your life, but has now faded away. The ending leaves me with nostalgia and feeling that we sometimes can just witness change, it happens and no aspect of life or love is set in stone. |
by Meena Krish
While I was reading this, the image that came to my mind is one where injustice is done to those who have no voice. A moving write with some deep touching sentiments. Congrats on the win. |
by Britt
When you come back to PnQ, you come back in style! This is a beautifully penned piece! I've so missed your writing! |