by Abed
:') |
<3 <3 <3 <3 |
by Kakera
Simply amazing. Uncomfortable like all hell to read, which I hope has impact on the ones who are too biased by their blessings to feel the bitter taste of reality. |
by Hellon
I honestly don't know what to say to this...there is so much emotion here that I'm quite speechless and feel totally inadequate to comment... |
by mazzy star
Let this city die in peace, |
by Marvellous
Men at war, are given no fun. Against all odds, victory prevails. |
by Saerelune
This could be some excellent spoken word. I could feel your voice so strongly already even without hearing. |
by Abed
Congrats, my best poet! <3 |
by nouriguess
Thank you, guys. <3 |
by DarkLight
I found it, so straight and true. Good |
by Meena Krish
A heart touching yet a truth filled poem. Each verse brings out vivid imagery and the writer's voice is clearly heard. Congrats on the win. |
There really aren't many words to add here, Noura, but I feel sometimes our "vents" or "rants" or whatever you want to call them are the most truthful, breathtaking pieces. This needed to be written and each line speaks with a loud voice. |
by Darren
Congrats, I feel only those with a true knowledge and experience of these situations have the right to write like this, |
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by Maple Tree
Noura, what can I say? Your poetry truly amazes me! You have captivated, inspired and humbled the reader with this poem.. I cried through the entire poem and am not afraid to admit that. |
by Glenn G
Beautiful expression of the ignorant killing the ignorant while the sweet, innocent, young, loved and peaceful are the ones who truly suffer. |