What a very creative little poem this is. I like the idea of the red apples, and the tree, and the mother/child concept of the poem. And also, your language choice of the older English is well used, it adds more character to your poem.

Well done

Judging Comment:

An interesting and creative write by the author.
The writer has used the concept of a mother and child
to bring out the feelings of a saddened apple and its
plight; with the tree (the mother) as a guide. I also like
the language used here which makes the read more
effective. Well written!