Luanne
This is such a sad heartbreaking piece. The words you have used make the reader feel your emotions.

You-Me "Without an - Us",
a thing once so uniquely comparable
to drawing a square without lines
or living forever

To lose this feeling makes you feel so all alone.
After feeling like one for so long.

Nothing existed anymore
between the sun and the rain

I loved these lines it leaves the reader feeling empty.
Wonderful write.
Take care Cindy

A wonderfully written piece, penned with such melancholy. Well done and all the best
Ben