Summer Heat (Rictameter)

You do such a wonderful job with your nature poems, and this is no exception. I like the feel and style of this. You really created a winter, cold, cool feel in the middle of summer and incorporated emotion (though I cannot tell if that was exactly intentional or not). Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this piece, and these two lines really caught my attention:

"leaving me floating upon a cloud of blue
for the sky is my soft playground"