by Kryptonite Dreamer Jul 24, 2014
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
I never understood what I was, |
by BlueJay
There is a little bit of dissonance between the beginning and the end of this piece, but you pulled it off artistically - so nice job. There is a little bit of flow distortion as well, but I think improving on that comes with time. Interesting piece for one of your first here. |
by uttAm
Excellent!!! |
Awwwwwwwwwww this is so beutiful, hun I love it, wonderful job, please don't ever sotp writing, you could change the world with it!!! |
I'm not a hero, |