I'm not a hero,
I'm a guardian,
^ that line was my favorite because a "hero" is similar to "guardian" but it differs on the meaning nice work 5/5

-Bet

Awwwwwwwwwww this is so beutiful, hun I love it, wonderful job, please don't ever sotp writing, you could change the world with it!!!

Excellent!!!

There is a little bit of dissonance between the beginning and the end of this piece, but you pulled it off artistically - so nice job. There is a little bit of flow distortion as well, but I think improving on that comes with time. Interesting piece for one of your first here.

Hope to see more from you in the future. 3/5