by -Choke-On-MY-Halo- Jul 24, 2014
category :
Life, society /
about society
Memoirs of souls |
by Euphanasia
Awesome write! |
Its good. I like the rhyming words. I have been told rhyme is so outI cant help it ;cuz I am "rhyminally insane"Doctor Seuss was a talented white rapper. |
Nicely written this piece of yours. |
by BlueJay
You were right when we were talking and you said your pieces for the contest weren't really you. This one is lacking your usual flair; however, one line stood out to me and really left me going wow, that was great, phenomenal line: |