Winter Kisses

I love the peace that I feel from this poem, it is uplifting I have never seen the snow and this just makes me want to see it more.
Well done

Such a picture is painted here! The snow tells me it is winter time, that is clear. And the couples holding hands is simple but it says a lot. That tells me there are two people in love and holding hands is very romantic. I believe the two key words here are mistletoe and snow. Because they set up the scene so well. It tells me that it's Christmas time and a young couple are showing their love for each other. The poem as a whole is well written. For some people Christmas is a happy time to spend with loved ones no matter who they are. Great story overall. 5/5

I remember a harsh critic who preached the limiting of personal pronouns
none in this none and it is hard to write without them for most of us

I feel this poem broke very few strict rules but the imagery and free flow make it appeal to me in so many ways

This is really cute. Im really impressed x3 I enjoyed this simple poem

I love this poem it makes me think I actually there with all that going on around me 10/10