Great work!!!

O specter of my fading wishes,
dance with me woman, I need it:
My taps followed by your fading steps
making music on this wooden floor -

^ This brings to mind an image of someone who is yearning for a lost love, that they there heart aches for one last night of embrace, but are instead dancing alone in the moment. I feel like it really sets a tone of loneliness but puts across emotion.

Dance with me, because you took my soul
to a place between love and hate
where demons and angels make music
out of the silence and the screams -

^ I like how throughout this poem you repeat the line "Dance with Me", but for this particular stanza, I feel like it would sound better to drop the "Dance with me, because" part and just start with you. It would add a bit less repetition and give a stronger start to the stanza. Just a personal thought.

Dance with me, even for one last night,
O lingering revenant of my past, dance.

^ I like the way this line ties in and puts across the point that this person is not with you, or at least physically.

We were going to be promising forever,
but we can't even seize the night properly;
I loathe my lack of power, my idiotic power,
and how I could never create miracles.

^ What about "We were going to promise forever"? I don't know if you put that tense in there on purpose or whatnot, but thought to point it out if not. [:

So dance with me, even for one last night,
because we're way beyond reinventing the past.
Dance with me a final time, my lover and my friend,
With your fading tears falling on my velvet dress.

Dance, my love.
For forever, my love.
Dance. Dance. Dance.

If only you knew...

^ I love the repetition and the way you faded it out in a sense. This would be an awesome spoken poem with a sort of haunting piano piece to accompany the voice. I really like it a lot.