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The eloquence you wrote this with is astounding, I love the spacing here which adds so much gravity to the words we're reading.

Really, fantastic write saved to favs!

Ben

I love your poetry.... I often come to your page to read when I need powerful poetry... I never commented on this poem but I have read it many times... it touches me deeply... such grace and passion in this poem...along with an empty sadness... ohhh the mixture of emotions you create in your art... I call it art because you are so crafty at making me cry with words... <3 love this and you <3

This poem holds such a deep message in it's whole form. The title is simple yes, but it makes the poem, because that's what the poem is, a conversation between two lovers.

First-- okay you start the feelings early, this girl is nervous about something. What it us we don't know...yet, but it's a great start because you capture the readers attention. By showing emotion you make the reader think.

Second- This line is powerful and can be interpreted in so many ways. What is the war, a war inside of himself or like fighting and guns?

Third- This line shows great emotion again, the guy is sad and wants to be back with his girl. And the last line is outstanding and the best. Love is love no matter what and this shows true love. This is a short poem but it shows great emotion and imagery. Very impressed. 5/5

This small wonderful write says so much,close to the heart.

Short but to the point. Well done.

Natalie