by Michael D Nalley Jul 27, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
It is eight twenty eight |
I like the aa bb rhyme scheme and I like that it has the time the actual time and the month time within the poem it's quite nice I couldn't do it I also like that you mention that summer is almost over but you aren't saying it like I am you leave it to the reader to figure it out :) nice job 5/5 |