by gloria
Simple but urgent message |
Everything flowed till the last sentence in my mind I don't know if that was the best way to end the poem I like the message don't get me wrong and I agree with you via poem but the last line didn't end it great it was good but it could've been better and also the center setting would've helped too but that's just me :) |
How about Only God can change a soul? |
That's perfect :) |