by ryan woollard Jul 29, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The smile I wear is just a mask on the face of pain I hold inside stood out in the rain so lost sometimes I don't know why I try to survive in this world each day I tell the people I love I'm alright its all a lie. |
In the beginning of every stanza for me would be better if you were to go like this |
by gloria
The last line makes the point. The rest is a bit repetitive but not bad. Just long |