by Meena Krish
I can see you have put in lots of thoughts as well as emotions in this write. As I was reading images of titanic, Romeo and Juliet kept playing in my mind. I could also see that each stanza was written with his and her views. Very well penned with all the yearning and love afloat. |
by John Doe
Thank you and I'll change the three thing right away |
by Em
I like this because it's long but keeps it's flow and also rhythm. The emotions, sadness, love and yearning are all there. |