by Lune de ma vie
This is just wow. What a expressive and deep write full of so much truth behind each word. The way you laid this out explaining the truth behind what poetry brings not only to you but for so many was truly a magical gift. |
Wow !!!! An excellent write.The word poetry is painted fabulously through out the length with a perfect flow. |
by Beautiful Soul
Expression is a key to anyones soul and through poetry we can express who we really are. Loved the details and feelings here. It seems like poetry has saved your life and has kept you safe. The hidden message to me here is that depression has gotten ahold of you and you cannot escape, but poetry let's you manage and let go of the bad feelings you hold inside, just like you did here. It kind of seems like you make depression to be like a person, or a best friend, someone who is always there for you. While it is true, poetry can speak to our and others souls. Which kind of makes it like we are talking to each other. That's the way it should be. Though you may be not be able to speak very well, poetry speaks for you. That's what matters. Excellent write! |
I adored this write, so I had to favorite it. |
I am absolutely bewitched and awe-struck!!! This poem is incredible Andrew!! what I absolutely love about this work is that: the title, short and sweet but grabs the curious-minded and reels you in B: the four line-three line combo,I love this type of format, throwing in a three-line stanza always spices it up a little C: you haven't used any extravagant words,a poet with minimal English skills can read and understand it, ie there is nothing superficial about it D: the poem is something every single poet in the history of poets can and will relate to, and it's straightforward manner will please any writer, you've highlighted all the feelings, thoughts and struggles of poets in such a smooth and transparent manner, one can't help but admire your skill. |