God's Rainbow

Rainbows perceive hope in all walks of life. And here its seems like you are finally free of the storm that caused you misery. The metaphor of the rainbow works well. There is now sunshine in your life. It seems like you were in a bad relationship or friendship even and finally broke free, what tells me that is the improved smile. You are a "new person" or are walking a new path. It really is an amazing feeling. Each relationship with God is different for each person so for that I loved the last stanza. Because with you feeling happy no one can take that away. Excellent write full of hope!

Nice write, Saffie! It's exactly I needed today. It's so easy to get lost in all of the negativity in the world and forget that God is still in control. There's beauty all around us, but we just have to be aware of it.

5/5.The positivity in life is beautifully depicted by the true colours of rainbow, a gift of God which brightens our lives.
A very strong resentment can be felt ,no sign of forgiveness.
Above all can feel the victory,no more dependency

I am no longer your fragile toy
hiding in a toy-box of your control

The growth with clarity,and positivity

Enjoyed thoroughly:)