Hey Bryant. Very nice poem. You did a wonderful job in writing such a fine piece. Very good flow and excellent wording. Nice descriptions; a simply brilliant piece of poetry. Keep up the wonderful work and take care!
Kind regards,
Kristina

Great poem! Very nice description. i believe I could actually feel the heat... and then feel the anger of the fire as it was forced to burn out.

Excellent!

That was a brillant poem, you did very very well on the detail and you wrote it so nicely. Thank you for the comment on my poem by the way, much appreciated hun.

this is excellent I like your describing skills!

I think you're the best at imagery, you sound like a professional.
Take good care of yourself.

Wow, awesome vocabulary, I really liked this poem, no critism that I can offer, Keep it up!

Wonderful poem. You're an awesome writer - keep it up!
-Kate

different but real cool
polly
xx

unique poem to say the least, i liked it and it seemed really good.

I would like to know the grammer mistakes and that way i would be able to fix them.

You get a Five.

U have an amazing way with words! Another great poem. I fu would check out some of mine! Don't expect that much after reading yours I am kind of embarrassed to have u read them! Thanx!

Great poem I like it alot