Oh Hannah, I really enjoyed this Quatern!

The message breaks my heart and you took a haunting, historical tragedy and made it into an elegant dedication... breathtaking!

Speechless. Even I don't really know how to comment this! And as Andrea said it is breathtaking. I think this is one of these poems where no words need to be said because you wrote it so well. Beautiful work Hannah. Very impressed.

Wow, I didn't realise how much of your work I had missed. Sorry about that!

Firstly, congratulations for mastering this form, very difficult to do and I can imagine it would take a lot of playing around with in order to perfect it.

I am amazed at how smoothly it flows, I really struggle to judge or comment on formed pieces, because I find it hard to understand the rules, and know if it has been done right. Especially when I have not attempted the form myself. But what I always do, is read the poem without it being a form, and if it feels flawless, then I think it has been a great poem because formed pieces can be so forced or begin to lose their sense.

I really liked your poem, and as always, the descriptions were so vivid, I could really see the scenes you painted with metaphors and great wording.

The tone of the poem is quite sad, in the way that beauty is often missed, or not appreciated.

Nice job