by Darren Aug 4, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
***DO NOT CLICK ON LINK BELOW UNTIL YOU HAVE READ MY STATEMENT** |
by NOOR
When I see this it makes me ask what and who are we people. |
by Cindy
Wow...I chose not to view the image...My heart would not be able to handle it. Your poem speaks enough sadness about the awful killing of an innocent life. You writing as a father was heart wrenching....My granddaughters make the loom bracelets just like your daughters...that vision you painted for the minds eye brought tears to mine. |
by Darren
Thanks to you both, Ben and Cindy. |
by Ben Pickard
Darren |
by Mr. Darcy
Hello Darren, |
by Darren
Thanks Mr D, |
by Beautiful Soul
Differing religion views seem to be one of the killers of this world. I liked the fact that you had beginning and ending statements to introduce the poem. Also I personally love the title. I would think that very few people have this little girls name. Or you made it your own. Megan gives personality to a dire and disgusting situation. In the first line using "Dorothy" is great because its clever for one but Dorothy had a blue dress and was also fairly young. Great connection. I liked the repetitive lines in between the stanzas. I believe its somewhat the plot of the message. And the rest of the poem is where to me the personality comes in. You give a "normal" life. Like the clothes and the games. Stuff little girls like. The twist at the end was outstanding. I think you meant by defending this girl they would take your head. What a passionate write about something so dreadful. 5/5 |
by Darren
Thanks James |