If Letting You Go Means Reaching Your Dreams....

by LittleMsPink   Aug 6, 2014


I love you for who you are,
I don't care about your looks...
Before you even got famous,
My heart you already took

But what happened? ....

I thought you were the one...
I thought we'd last forever...
It hurts, that we're now done..

But i'm still happy...

You manage to go so far...
You reached your dreams, you're like the moon...
And i ...
a tiny star...

A star that twinkles with the rest,
Waiting to be known...

If i'm still in your heart...

Then baby....

Come back home...

~ so... i haven't been posting poems for a while.. been busy
Anyways... i just decided to write a short poem 'cause i was reading this random break up thingies of celebrities and ouch... i felt so sad... so yeah... i decided to write this poem...
I'm hoping you guys like it..
Tell me what you think
Comments and rates are much appreciated <3

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  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is fantastic!

  • 10 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nice!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    Awe sweetie this was cute but I think you would've made it darker since I'm a lover of dark poems where the pain is intense but that's just me also some grammar mistakes but hun this was really cute :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Fenix Flight

    This is so amazing! the love and heartbreak is Clearly shinning in it. Very beautiful!!!!! keep it up!!! 100/5 :-D

  • 10 years ago

    by JesusFreakAuthor

    Awww this is so beautiful!!! I totally love itm the effort you put into it is obvious and the feeling is forever with the reader, good job

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