I was cold before I read this, so naturally I had cold chills, after reading this though? Shivers going up and down my spine.

I like how you started off explaining how the day was in the very first sentence. It isn't something you'd really expect coming out of a dark poem, it's different.

I wouldn't be able to follow the importance of the format being the way it is if you hadn't broke it down for me. I do like this new genre of yours, can't wait to read more.

Hi jack, i gotta say this is freakin awesome I wish I could nominate it, the imagery and projection of emotions is crisp amd you word choice amd format is on point!

I've been creeping about your older poems and I love your in depth style of writing.

Awesome job

Ben