by Maple Tree Aug 10, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Anxiously penning words |
by Sylvia
It does work well in that it does not sound forced, reads very natural and seems to express doubt from the writer wondering if people really do read or care what they write and that they, the writer, really does have something to say. |
by Maple Tree
Thank you Sylvia and Beautiful Soul :-) |
by Maple Tree
You are correct Sylvia and thank you... :-) |
by Sylvia
Nice work with the form but for the acrostic, the title should be your name since that is what the "acrostic" spells. |
by Beautiful Soul
As poets we are our own worst critic. We never do know what people will say or if they will read our poems. The message is simple but I think every single person can relate to it. Awesome use of your name as well. Nominated. Well done |