by Poet on the Piano Aug 13, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I knew nothing of Assisi but the blinking stars, |
by Beautiful Soul
I loveeeee that song so that's what got to me and the last line as well. This works really well as a whole. We think we know what love really is, but we don't. I don't think anyone truly knows. But the heart feels it. It just is. The imagery is beautiful and adding the location works well because it makes it more personal. To me this has a lot of emotion which woek s well in any poem. Real life experiences are great to write about. Because you can retell what happened. The last line is wonderful to me. It's a thought so no one knows how you really feel but you do know. You want to pretend to know what love is but you don't. Or didn't ! Excellent short write |