by Poet on the Piano Aug 13, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Sharps and flats, |
by Beautiful Soul
Music metaphors work well here because of the way you wrote it and talked about. It seems like this persons words are very sharp and cut deep. Though I do not know how to read music, the stage is a great thought. Each "fight" is a performance that no one really enjoys. I like the shovel/grave lines. That tells me that you just want to get away from the fight because no one truly wins. We always blame other people for our problems and that's when lives change and emotions come into play. It never ends well. People care, but we each show it in a different way. Great write! |