by Darren Aug 13, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Looking back demoralises |
by Beautiful Soul
Okay a couple of things at first. Great job with the spelling of fuelled. It will definitely throw a lot of people off. Very tricky and clever. And in the second stanza second line, I don't think "a" needs to be there. |
by Darren
Thanks once again, I have removed the offending 'a' |