Wow. Getting lost in thoughts can be good or bad. I love the two stories there seem to be here. The first half you seem to be lost in thoughts about why?. Why are you here in this world. "Am I" part of everyday life just like the people around me, struggling and lying to myself. I think we always look for a sign at one point or another but I love how you jumped from the negative side and this girl brought you back to reality. It seems like in your eyes your daught er is an angel so to speak. I liked how you looked at the sky and whom you think is a sign came out. Clever! You had an aha moment. It's in that moment you needed to stay alive for her. We all have that one person we need and you need her. Excellent!

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