Holy moly this is excellant!

Mr. Porcelain Moon has written a short and truly magical poem this week. His word usage and fun format is brilliant!
The word display and visuals are fun and exciting! Hard to do in a small piece.
I like the usage of melodramatic chariots- Fun way to describe cars under the moon.. There is a sad and somber tone in this piece... a sense of loneliness and He has written a gem here!

I like the way you wrote this so simply and yet it says so much so easily so wonderfully.

Especially enjoy the last line