by JRS
This is dark, so terrifying! all i can say is wow so good, goosebumps! |
This sent shivers down my spine. The duality of the poem reflects the duality of the speaker beautifully. Although a dark piece about someone in a very dark place there is a sort of innocent naivety about the speaker that makes it even more chilling. To be so out of control of your own mind and body that you have no idea what you have done or wheere you are must be terrifying and very confusing. |
I have to say, I've found myself completely in love with your writing! I don't know why I haven't seen it before? I'm so glad that you participated in these past two weekly writing prompts! You definitely have a new fan! ;) |
by Lune de ma vie
Dynamic in every sense of the word. This poem is true to life in an intensely Stygian manner! |
by Karla
Love your piece.It is unique! |
by earlgreytea
Holy frag, where have you been on this site? |
by Meena Krish
Judging Comment: |
How very brave. No matter the "condition" as if under interrogation lights of old, you stripped down to the place others of us refuse to accept, refuse to go, or refuse to talk about. Such bravery to type in each word and so clearly paint a picture to haunt our dreams. I could feel the sterile, impersonal, and cold surroundings throughout as a backdrop to your human condition. Life. |