by Beautiful Soul
Wowow Brooke, I am very impressed with this. Starting the poem out with "because" I love because it pulls you into the story. Like you want the reader to sympathize with you. The message is very clear. This person won your heart and then broke it. You are happy with them but you truly feel alone. I love the conflicting emotions you show, that's really what love is. At first it can be amazing then sad. You never know. Excellent! |