Blitz

by Sunshine   Aug 18, 2014


You kept wondering
when will peace take over
all the chaos,
then I made you realize
that chaos has already
conquered our peace
when your eyes fired me
with silent struggle.

You unwrapped your arms
to dig a hole and entomb the ruin,
but the load was too heavy
and so was our mess.

By: Rania Moallem

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wow! What a blunt and powerful poem - especially the end which really hits hard:
    "....but the load was too heavy and so was our mess" - excellent. I love your work, Rania.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Great poem!

    It flows beautifully and I love the metaphores. Nice message too, It is true that sometimes we get too deep in a relationship that we don't want to let go, yet we don't realise how distructive it has been to us.

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