It put smile on my lips. I like what you did with shimmers, glimmers, simmers, it was fun to read it. At first I had no clue what you were talking about until I read the note. Then it made sensed. I think I wasnt sure what uou were talking about because of the last part, "it will use its wings and fly away soon." After re-reading I though you might be speaking of the candles. Then it was funny to imagine a candle with real wings lol. Up to that point I wasn't sure if you were still talking about the candles or not. Or if you were describing how you were feeling as the candles were burning.

Overall, I like the cheerfulness in this piece.