Flawless piece

Judging Comment:

I like the simplicity of this poem. There is sadness in
it but it has become part and parcel of life. War
and death is tearing the country apart, but life goes
on; its as if they have embraced this reality.

I especially like the ending verses for it holds a
glimmer of hope in the dreams they dream. One
thing war can't take away from civilians. I find
this write simply beautiful in its sadness...moving
write.

This is simple yet stunningly executed.

No matter what part of the world we are from, we have our dreams and we will dream then either till we die or until they become reality.

Em