Comments : Door

  • 10 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Jyoti ,your pain is reflecting in this nicely penned piece .Your emotions depict you are fed up and take it no more .Take care dear :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Heartache is felt throughout this piece.
    Well penned.
    Raw emotion surely pours out through it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The door of distance is open,

    ^^this first line itself caught me and as I read it,
    the pain of it all shows..there is only so much a person can take..its sad that the other does not see it...touching..take care.