by ShadowsEmber Aug 29, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It's crazy how I feel like I mean nothing to you. |
by BlueJay
I really like this, it has an overflow of emotion and a very interesting voice shines here. The word choice is decent and worked well within this piece. Your choice of style was interesting, but it does not really seem to fit what you are saying. maybe if you had some time you could go back and try reformatting this - just a little. |