by William Mae Aug 29, 2014
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
One Size Coffin |
by NightFlyer
A poetic reminder of the inevitable, how we race around in life, pursuing our dreams, not knowing when our turn will be. Similar thoughts I feel when passing a graveyard, were only a stone and epitaph indicate there was once a person who had their own dreams and accomplishments. Nice write. |
by William Mae
Thank you nightflyer |
by Meena Krish
Whether rich or poor, educated or not death does not choose who or what. Death's bed is the same for all. |
by William Mae
Thank you Meena, |
by Everlasting
Interesting beat, may I ask what meter are you using? |
by William Mae
I really know almost nothing about the technical terms for poetry. I never considered the meter of poetry when i write it. I did look it up and if i understand it mine here would be a mixed meter, a 4/3 beat, a tetrameter followed with a trimeter. And even this may be wrong, lol, because I really dont know much about it. Thanks for reading my poem though. |