A very touching write.William you are excellent in your compositions.

Judging Comment:

The story unraveled here tugs at the heart and
draws a tear. First off there are not many good
hearts who will go out of their way to help a
homeless; here it shows that good heart going an
extra mile to get to know this person, to understand
the sadness in his face/life.

I like the way this story poem unfolded and as I
kept reading, it just grew more and more sad.
Also makes me wonder how many soldiers out there
are giving their all to keep our country safe yet we
in return do not give, appreciate or love.

A heart touching write

What a beautiful, heart wrenching piece.
I'm blubbering.. Too much of,this is happening!