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by BlueJay
A single time is enough to evoke Memory of the forgotten pain but ^ something is missing here, maybe A memory or memories? It just doesn't flow quite right and it makes the reader stumble a little. Other than that, this is a wonderful sonnet. Great job, very well described emotions and beautifully penned thoughts.
by Fading Memory
It's just perfect they way it came out , brilliant i just love it , feel's true close and calling :)