Comments : Thunderstorm

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Hey Stringybean, I love this piece like I love all of your poems, but I love the descriptions in this one and the style you chose, you've really outdone yourself with this one.

    "Only a drop or two
    escaping down my face"
    ^I love that, but remember our deal? No crying.

    I miss you. I hope you're doing well. But beautiful piece