My Despair

by ShadowsEmber   Sep 5, 2014


The clouds go dark and gray
That weary night of nothing to say
You said the words
I tried to muster up the courage.
As the tears fell,
I was caught in that spell.
And just like that, all was lost.
It just isn't fair,
How the one i love so dear is the reason for my despair.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Beautiful amazing just a very fine piece of finest art :) just like it

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Way too many people can relate to this, trust me I know. But at the same time you've made this so personal and let your heart shine through in such a perfectly sad way. Amazing piece, though Might I suggest taking it out of the center format? It distracts the audience a little with this piece.

    Also the last line I think would have more of an impact if it were separated from the rest of the piece by a blank line or two or something like that.

    "I was caught in that spell.
    And just like that, all was lost."

    ^ I love that

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