What a insane artistic poem! The imagery is really deep and strong throughout the poem. You put together a poem that flows so gracefully and incorporates so much artistic vividness. Something out of a storybook for sure! You left me with a smile ear to ear as I read this, I loved the quirkiness of it and the humour within it. I would find a poem like this a bit tough to write but you did a fantastic job with it making it it's own unique storybook.
5/5
Very funny, very fun read!

Great original take

Rotfl!!!!!!! What Assn ingenious poem!!!!!!I love love love the twist at the end and the moral :-P