That just made me laugh, cry and smile all at once, whilst also making me truly contemplate life.yes it is a bold question"are you truly the master of your life?"I think many people would probably answer"yes"or"that's a bold question"until they actually sit and think about it for real

Some suggestions if I may? :-) (are you aware of its every breath) should be (are you aware of it's every breath) perhaps instead of (this life, it slips away..) Try (this life-it slips away...) (golden moments, anyway, that count) rather be (golden moments anyway, that count) (and I ask for not more than fifteen...) Rather use (no more...) (what's wrong, if I want fifteen minutes anyway) try (what's wrong with me wanting fifteen minutes anyway) and that's that I hope you don't mind my interference? :-)